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| In there first ever Shuzak contest, I hereby challenge everyone to propose their vision of the future. This vision can be anything, a photomanipulation, a 3d render, a drawing, a painting, a poem, a story, anything at all. It can portray vast interstellar dramas or bleak dystopian landscapes. You are free to do what you like. The admin is being consulted about providing a special prize to the winner, but if he refuses, everyone who enters this contest and loses agrees to refer to the winner as a name of his choice until the next winner is crowned. Also, the winner gets to pick the theme of the next contest. Now go to it.  | 
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| Total Topic Karma: 20 | - More by this Author | |||
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| it begins... | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| erm. at the end do we just kinda put it somewhere and link it? or what? or did i miss that? | ||||||
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| yes, put it somewhere and link it, if you have issues hosting it, zak hobs and he'll help you out. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| or me, I have the ability to host things. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| I can't wait to see the submissions. I'm pretty much only posting here so that it shows up in my replied to box. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| ah. and i think you mentioned this in the chat but for everyone elsees sake i'll ask. does it have to be age appropriate. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Yes, I think we agreed to keep it PG. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Awesome. I'll fire up my writing juices. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| use www.googlepages.com if you need to host anything. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Incidentally, post here if you want to make an entry. Also RyeGye, your link is down.  | 
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| sorry the fixed link is here | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| okay. Cool. | ||||||
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| my vision of the future is not pg. we have pictures  | 
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| Rathmaster, Then after you make it, add censor bars.  | 
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| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| perhaps, if someone can't make theirs pg, they could add a link here with a rating in thecomment. | ||||||
| - 19 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| good idea. | ||||||
| - 20 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| My vision of the future is being in a prison :|. *is answering bail today* but I will hopefully be alright *shrugs*. | ||||||
| - 21 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Wait, where didja get the computer from? | ||||||
| - 21 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| All right, with this post, i formally announce myself as the first ever contender in The Contest. I hereby tender  my entry.  It is a short story, i would rate it M15+. It contains coarse language, some horror and adult themes.  | 
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| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Cool. Great work. I'm going to have to ste work harder.  | 
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| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Tell me about it; what I've got so far reads like the bastard lovechild of Heinlein and Vernor Vinge. (If you discount robot violence then it's pretty PG so far, though.) | ||||||
| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| lol. Mine's going fairly well, although I wasted a lot of time trying other mediums before getting back to what I'm good at.  | 
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| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Sit down and biro like you've never biroed before! | ||||||
| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Here is the current verison of my entry: http://aticper.googlepages.com/home I'll probably go through and edit it further later, but this is the brunt of the story line. I should warn you, there's no sex or really much violence, but there are some rather disturbing bits. Just a heads up.  | 
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| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| that is excelent ati, bloody cindy! how could she? | ||||||
| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Thank you. I rather liked it. I's the first real bit of prose I've written in several years.  | 
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| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Incidentally, thanks for posting yours (which is great).  It made me put more effort and care into it than I normally probably would have. As it is, I still don't think it's quite up to it, so I'll go over and do some major editing tomorrow.  | 
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| well i might do the same, mine needs a spell check and a couple of sentances shifted around. | ||||||
| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| It'll be interesting to see what the other entry's look like. | ||||||
| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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agreed Ati, i'm waiting for one of the physists to jump in with some mind boggling hypothesis, or a muso to bust out some mad song about entropy. Some one has got to be drawing a post apocalyptic waste land as we speak..  its gonna be sweet ![]()  | 
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| - 22 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Sweet stuff, Ati! | ||||||
| - 23 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Thank you. | ||||||
| - 23 February, 2007 | ||||||
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| Hmmmm.... Two more days left.  | 
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| - 24 February, 2007 | ||||||
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